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Re: The Uprising
Deaven: He screamed. He screamed as the whip came down on his back. It was sheer pain. When they finally stopped, he was lifted. They walked through the deck, Deaven ...
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Re: Dragon Riders
Maradomin: "Ciru, did you think I would use torture." "Yes. Acctually I did." "Well then you were totally correct." Maradomin smiled Ciru looked at him disgusted. "Of course it wouldn't ...
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Re: The Uprising
Deaven Labor slave: He was pushed back to the cells after a long rowing trip. They were back in the group cages. Again cuffed. Deaven sat there. He saw a ...
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Re: The Uprising
Deaven L'evon: He looked as the body fell to the ground. It slammed against the hard rock of the street. "Nooo!" He shout out. "No!" Deaven shot awake. He was ...
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Re: Cry of The fallen swords
Darren: "My lord. What are you doing here?" Darren asked Franz "You sent me a message of your grave, and defeat." Darren rose from his knees. "But you did not ...
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Re: The Uprising
Name: Deaven L'evon Race: Human Class: simply... slave. Age: 34 gender: male appearance: weight: 83 kg height: 193 color of eyes: dark brown any other features: scars on his back ...
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Re: Owl Wings
Torn: He was standing by the rocks, He heard them trying to escape. Now they were using fire! Were they idiots? They would use up all of their oxygen. He ...
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Re: I like pie ^^
Please review these: This shouldn't be prologue The mansion chapter 1 The mansion chapter 2 The ripper prologue
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Re: I eat reviews
Please review these: This shouldn't be prologue The mansion chapter 1 The mansion chapter 2 The ripper prologue
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Re: Quality Reviews Inc.
Please review these: This shouldn't be prologue The mansion chapter 1 The mansion chapter 2 The ripper prologue Please :)
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Re: Free Reviews. I love to review :lol:
I'm interested by your story... I will read it, (when I have time) Please review these: This shouldn't be prologue The mansion chapter 1 The mansion chapter 2 The ripper ...
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Re: Beyond the hills-Chapter 4
Okay. How did Ro get to the place he went to? Explain. There aren't many mistakes here that I could see. The only ones are the comma and period mistakes. ...
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Re: Republican question
All hail socialism.
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Re: Candles Never Lit
I'll join. But please do not do the portal thing again. That is the part where I fell totally out last time. Name: Alcander Garson Age: 315 Race(mythological wise): Sun ...
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Re: Owl Wings
Torn: He was drifting in his pitch black mind. So the other boy had powers too! This was most troublesome, also his leg was broken wich made matters worse. But ...
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